Some Wish On Eternal Day

U know, when I felt sad
I`ll smile a lot
I don`t want u know what I felt now

When I miss u
I will saw u at secretly
and u can`t know I looking at u

I thought,
I could be your
But, it just dream
That I never can get it

When u knew, I love u,
What u will say?
What u thought `bout me?
I don`t know

I always care u
But perhaps u don`t knew it

Did u love me?
Did u know how love me to u?
Did u know when u far from me I felt alone?
Did u can love me more than I do?

I thought,
U are my sweet heart that I love 4 eternity
When was the eternity days come?
I wish I will with u on that day. .
Together forever . . . . . . .

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marialaksmi's picture
marialaksmi at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (7 weeks 3 days yang lalu)
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hiks... kenapa kau tahu perasaanku.

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GodelivaSilvi at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 6 hours yang lalu)
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coba disadur ke bahasa indonesia, lebih catchy pastinya Wink
salam kenal, thanks dah komen ya.. keep on writin'

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navigator at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 1 day yang lalu)
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stidaknya mirip lirik lagu ya.

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pembebas at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 2 days yang lalu)
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cara penulisannya.
terus mencoba...
salam kenal
makasih dah kasih komen.

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ezra at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 2 days yang lalu)
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gali lagi

salam

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Irin Sintriana at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 2 days yang lalu)
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Coba diedit lagi ya penulisannya Smile

Keep writing. Cia you. Mampir juga ke tempatku.

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d757439 at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 2 days yang lalu)
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puisi inggris merajai forum....

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ai3nma at Re: Some Wish On Eternal Day (8 weeks 2 days yang lalu)
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Give comment liaw....

>juxt me_ai3nma<