yah, akhirnya, dipostinglah sudah episode-2. beberapa bagian terpaksa kurevisi demi menjauhkan cerita ini dari gelar 'cabul'. bukan apa2, kalau sampai postingan yg ke-2 ini dikarantina, cerita Layangan-ku bisa ompong. jadi tidak sedap dipandang (dibaca), belum lagi kerepotan membuat cerita pengganti. anyway, masih banyak kesalahan dalam teknik penulisan nih. kalau ada yg mau kasih ilmu tambahan, monggooo
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