How do I make you understand?
about the pain that's dwelling in my mind
about those words that shot me like a gun
How do I make you understand?
that making love with you couldn't be just for fun
that living my life with you is all I want
How do I make you understand?
about how my love got crucified by your ignorance
about how my mind got slaughtered by your rejection
You wouldn't take my love but affections
Only affections!?
It doesn't make any sense
What is love if not affections?
You don't even bother to tell the difference
Can't you see me grieving?
Can't you feel me burning?
My darling...
The sun has got to rise from the east
The fall has got to arrive after the spring
I've just got to love someone
and be loved in return
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"Are u understand??"
semua menjawab serentak, "tand!!!!"
ampun! sekarang komen serius!:Melow sekali..hiks..hiks
...mau komen serius, baca punya ima jadi pengen ketawa *hmmph*
tapi brown, memang, mellow sekali... ada apa to?
aku memang sedang sedih. tapi bagus juga, jadi bisa bikin puisi, meski rada mellow. tapi yg mellow ini pun tetap brown jg.
ntar aja ima...brisik!!!
kayaknya pindah2an tadi malam sempat bikin tampilan postinganku agak mengacau. sorry, worm, mungkin kamu tadi sempat lihat yg kacau itu. yg ini sudah kurevisi.
arien: 'I stand under you'? thanks banget, aku sampai terpingkal2, lumayanlah bikin cerah/ceria suasana yg tadinya mellow itu. kukira cuma si ima yg rada gila di sini.
fortherose, kamu benar. Ima! jangan bikin rusak suasana dung! ini kan puisi mellow!
brown lagi mellow.. brown lagi mellow..
wih ur love will be return,nice poem
brown napa???
Ime.. dzig.... ini kan puisi mellow...!!!
"Do you understand..?
"Yes I stand under you..!!" Ima Said..
Ima Dzigg.... 1000x..
> Nice poem...
keep writing
kaya bukan karyanya brown yah...tapi kata2mu masih setajam biasa brown...
just beat it! Mr.brown (coklat)
you must be a great person for love
..puisi mellow berbau2 cinta.. hmm...
Love can hurt you more than anything else can. Well, I dunno if you agree with me but... if you can't be with the one you love, love the the one you are with.
keren sis! in English-pula
top dah ^_^
*toyor ima
*kaburrrr
aku setuju dengan Ratih