Deru Nasib

Dribbling lentera
Memberkas cahaya ,sirna
Merunduki nasib
Berubah hanyut menjadi lebur
Malang

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Writer lyricist egi poet
lyricist egi poet at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
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wah saya sampe kegiles hebat-hebat komen juga punyaku yah

Writer Yovan Wisnu
Yovan Wisnu at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
70

Arema Malang ya?

freesoulflyer at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
90

gw suka .. tapi kurang ditambah baitnya..masih kerasa belum final

Writer puncakdewa
puncakdewa at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
80

pemilihan katanya cerdas,punya latar belakang yang kuat dan paham betul karakter kata, jadi diksi yang pas

Writer prince-adi
prince-adi at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
70

sedikit lagi kena mas...

Writer berry_pri
berry_pri at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)

prince-adi wrote:
sedikit lagi kena mas...

apa emang aku pantas jadi mas mas ye
>:) >:) >:)

Writer berry_pri
berry_pri at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)

ye

Writer seruni
seruni at Deru Nasib (10 years 20 weeks ago)
80

simple ...tapi bagus koq. puisi bgt malah ....