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Tags: Cerita | Cerita Bersambung | drama | mainstream romance
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Writer lfour
lfour at deleted (8 years 14 weeks ago)
90

wkwkwkwkw damn rick keren...
saya suka doi...
lanjut...

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 14 weeks ago)

Saya juga suka.. *loh??*
Heheheh

Writer Sun_Flowers
Sun_Flowers at deleted (8 years 20 weeks ago)
80

ak suka part McKenzie menelpon Gene dan khawatir dy sdang sakit...
huhuuhu..manis sekali

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 19 weeks ago)

Hehehe..

Writer Riesling
Riesling at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)
90

Sudah nebak bakal gini kejadiannya, tapi ga papalah. Akhirnya muncul juga si Damnrick. Saya pikir dia dikasih antivirus lagi xDD.

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Hehe predictable yak?
Jgn dikasih antivirus deh, ganteng soalnya ixixixi..

Writer amy
amy at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)
100

Salam kenal, kak lav. .

Udah baca dr awal tp lupa komennya, hehe. .
Karya kak lav kayak novel2 terjemahan, kerenn!! Kok bisa sih kak? Ajarin donk, aq msh pemula. .
*ngarep*

Ditunggu next partnya kak. .

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Aku jg msh pemula kok.. Itu krn aku suka pake nama dan setting barat aja jd berasa asing mungkin..
Terima kasih telah membaca.. :)

Writer amy
amy at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Ah, kk tlalu merendah. .
Ehm, apa iya? Tp kayaknya gak gitu kok, suasana dan gaya hidup cerita bneran mirip nOvel terjemahan. .

Sama2 kk. .

Writer amy
amy at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Kk terlalu merendah nih. .

Ehm, apa karna itu, tp kayaknya gaya hidup asing jg masuk deh. .

Sama-sama. .

Writer amy
amy at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Kk terlalu merendah nih. .

Ehm, apa karna itu, tp kayaknya gaya hidup asing jg masuk deh. .

Sama-sama. .

Writer amy
amy at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Kk terlalu merendah nih. .

Ehm, apa karna itu, tp kayaknya gaya hidup barat jg masuk deh. .

Sama-sama. .

Writer tyo adit
tyo adit at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)
100

mba' lavender..., aku suka karya mu yg 20-something ini..., aku pembaca setia cerpen mu ini..., tiap hari slalu menunggu kelanjutannya..., jgn lama2 ya di munculin seri yg k 9 dan seterusnya... :D. Pemeran2 tokohnya keren2 semua.., jd enak ngbayanginnya....

d tgu ya mba'.... ^^

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Weww.. Terima kasih telah membaca.. :)
Itu pemeran2nya aku juga suka hehe..

Writer fachrunnisa eva
fachrunnisa eva at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)
90

huh.. cowok klo dah bikin cinta mati malah selingkuh,,,,geuleuh!!! heheheh lanjuuuuut...:D

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

Geuleuh tu apaan, va?

Writer fachrunnisa eva
fachrunnisa eva at deleted (8 years 28 weeks ago)

geuleuh = sebel

Writer suararaa
suararaa at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)
90

udah kuduga dari part2 awal klo jeff selingkuh. udah ketebak sih sejak serng susah dihubungi, ato membatalkan janji..

tapi suasana pertengkaran atau suasana hati kesedihan gene kurang terasa 'menggigit' di sini... beda ama yg fly n kiss in the sky .....

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Ho oh, mmg predictable story jadinya aku ksh tag mainstream..
Hehehe agak susah bwtku menarasikan diri sendiri n kejadian sekitar dlm waktu yg sama dgn POV I, terus jg mgkn mmg kurang garam jd ga berasa.. Ixixixixixi..

Writer cat
cat at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)
90

Lav ... entah mengapa aku sudah menyangka perselingkuhan Jeff.

Tapi aku tidak suka ada Riley di situuu .. mckenzie aja dunk ...

huaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ... ikutan nangis bersama Gene.

Riley ma Rachel
Gene ma Mckenzie .. horeeeeeeeeeeeeee

asal diriku ini.

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Iya mbak udah dikasih clues yg mengarah k cheating..
Aaahhh mbaaaak apa salah Riley, kok ndak boleh ada di situ ixixixixixixxiix..
Horeeee semua senaaanggg jadinyaaa dpt atu2.. Ixixixi..

Writer cat
cat at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Wah wah happy ending, hore hore.

Writer dede
dede at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)
100

Benci bgt jd nya sm jeff.
What a bloody hell guy...!! Saya jd pingin marah2 bacanya *emosijiwamode:on*

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Saya jugaaa.. Pengen marah2.. Ixixixix..

Writer Gancanagh
Gancanagh at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Keren banget.,,
jeff tega...
G sabar tunggu chapter berikutx..

^_^

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Terima kasih telah membaca..

Writer Midori_Fukuro
Midori_Fukuro at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)
100

Lagi headache, Lav.
titip poin dulu ya ^_^

Insya Allah, saya akan berkunjung kembali
btw, Majnun mana? tidak pernah muncul...

Kamu berbakat...!!!
thanks...
>>>menghilang

Writer lavender
lavender at deleted (8 years 29 weeks ago)

Ok, thx Midori..
Majnun lg sibuk..
Mule lg berbakat2nya, daku giles lho..