Stranger

 

 

Empty room across the road 

Spiders working on nets, decorating 

Long  the silence of the world— 

The curse broken by cry of sorrow 

 

Empty room across the road 

Swimming through the air— 

Hollow hopes remain hollow 

Burnt memories leave scars on walls 

 

Empty room across the road— 

These hands are unable to reach you 

This mouth is shut 

I am stranger to myself 

 

May the 19th

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pinky_chan at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)
100

bagus, tapi entah kenapa masih lebih dramatis remorse... ^^ saya sukkaaa... :) gayamu nulis puisi ngingetin saya sama lirik2 di opera gitu.. dark tapi puitis abis.

Writer synrio
synrio at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

Hehe, soalnya yang ini nulisnya asal
(jadi hasilnya asal juga XD)
Anyway makasih kunjungannya :)

Nunu Nhunaiya at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

Hi Stranger!

Writer synrio
synrio at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

Hi Nunu, I'm Stranger. Nice to meet you and thanks for the visit :)

Writer Zoelkarnaen
Zoelkarnaen at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)
100

I like the words you used, maybe you should try to write stories too... ^^

Writer synrio
synrio at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

I have tried several times but failed miserably XD XD
Still need years to write one :p

Writer Riesling
Riesling at Stranger (8 years 7 weeks ago)

*raise hand* OBJECTION!!!

Writer bintangnatnib
bintangnatnib at Stranger (8 years 13 weeks ago)
100

Suka... banget! :D
Membayangkan aku bakal jadi murid kesayangan guru Bahasa Inggris kalo bisa nulis puisi ginian. :)
Salam kenal ya.
Komen-komen puisiku juga di http://kemudian.com/node/255414

Writer synrio
synrio at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

Ohoho, terima kasih
Saya sempatkan mampir nanti (^ ^)

Writer neko-man
neko-man at Stranger (8 years 13 weeks ago)
90

keren bang

Writer synrio
synrio at Stranger (8 years 12 weeks ago)

Makasih udah mampir bang neko (^ ^)