Liar, liar, pants on fire!

thousand fake stories
beyond drama great remake
not a drop of bore
plethora of lies being baked

but for me...
lie is a shake in the knee
over abundance regret
wouldn't dare for a bet

guilty, anger
collide in danger
eyes won't be shuttable
one mistake lie is a label

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Writer aprillia28
aprillia28 at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 38 weeks ago)

Maybe need just a little change in the use of words, I prefer classical word for an english poem.
Thank's

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 38 weeks ago)

thank you aprilia :)
indeed true

Writer Ahbian _Kosnadi
Ahbian _Kosnadi at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)
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buka kamus dulu ahhh hehehe

salam all

Writer hidden pen
hidden pen at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)
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Ettoo I could'nt write grammar or speak english ^ _ ^ yeah I translate
it's more :v . Good on identity lie then? I
almost feel this so #disepak though I feel the
title poem maybe not connect. The title liar pants on
fire a thousand and a thousand stories lie or story
content label. Umm yeah sorry I failed
understand about it . Maybe you will explain me about it ? Allright I leave the next commentator ^ _ ^ oohh then im not will look very smart about critic. Hmm sorry me not help you so much -_-

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)

ettooo, anno, wakarimasen ka?
bang, komennya pakai bahasa indonesia aja bang. saya ngga ngerti apa apa jadinya, kecuali kata disepak. haha. ini kayanya memang ngga layak tayang puisinya. terlalu impulsif.
terima kasih

Writer Wanderer
Wanderer at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)
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Seru juga nemu yang pakai bahasa asing.
Plethora of lies, berasa pernah dengar di mana gitu.
Salam kenal.

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)

Itu kata umum, pastinya banyak digunakan dimana mana.
Ini sebenernya (ga perlu dijelasin) JELEK bangetttt..
Semoga bisa kritik membangun ya
Salam kenal jugaa

Writer Wanderer
Wanderer at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)

Wah jangan marah dong, kan saya ga bilang jelek :(
Saya apalagi masih cupu banget, jadi maaf belum bisa memberi kritik membangun.
Semangat terus :)

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Liar, liar, pants on fire! (3 years 39 weeks ago)

eh nggaa, saya ngga marah. Cuma menjelaskan kata plethora itu kata yg sangat umum aja gitu. waduh saya juga cupu sangat.