Wander

The sun is shining an inch away

Yet no eyes turn blinded

The moon now glued to the bay

Yet no waves being stranded

 

Because the sun never really there

Nor does the moon ever present

In other galaxy they wander

'Though its just a creeping bent

 

Why set a war with clarity?

Why spread gloomy dust to make a pity?

Sprinkle sugar and sweet to make them pretty

Stolen, tortured and dead, where is honesty?

 

Alone, alone he wander

His own fear he never conquer

Flying in beneath the milky way

Collecting stars to powder

 

'Til when?

 

 

 

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Writer samalona
samalona at Wander (3 years 39 weeks ago)
100

Impressive.
Some small crit: on L8 (last line on second stanza), the word "though" does not require an apostrophe. The next word, "its", on the other hand, does.
Thank you for sharing this poem.
Salam
Keep on writing.

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Wander (3 years 39 weeks ago)

True! The 'though was a mistype in the other hand for its, yes i confess that i never really bother about apostrophe. I really should tho :). Thank you very berry muchhh

Writer hidden pen
hidden pen at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)
80

kemampuan ane mash kecil dalam berbahasa asing. #gubrak. Hmm tapi liriknya oke. ^_^

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)

Makasih bang hidden

Writer Wanderer
Wanderer at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)
100

Suka dengan bait keempat :)
Mengutip pak J. R. R Tolkien: "not all those who wander are lost."
Sometimes you just have to let them find their own path, no matter how long it'd take...

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)

You might like it because it has wander in it, which is the same like this id that you are using rite now :)
But this person wander because this person rarely present, there but not there. Getting the further closer but getting the closer further..and powder it all with sugar and sweet. Intinya gitu deh, hehe..masih jauh lah sama mba der yg hits abis kalo bikin puisi dan cerpen :)

Writer Wanderer
Wanderer at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)

I don't like it, I love it! :)
Selalu suka karya apapun tentang berkelana. Hehe.
Though, perhaps, this poem is different from my perspective, my kind of wandering. Still, I love it.
Though all that is gold does not glitter, though honesty is gone and fear is in the air, I like the symbol of optimism you put in his aim of wandering.
Cuap-cuap asal saya saja. Hehe.
Jauh dari hits, masih cupu banget puisi saya...
Semangat utk terus berkarya ya :)

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Wander (3 years 40 weeks ago)

Ngga laahh..mba dir mah kereen puisinya :)..tapi terimakasih banyak bangettt uda mampir dan bilang i dont loke it, i love it..hehe