Stop and Still

Hiding behind the wooden barrel

Avoiding a lover you decide to ignore

Singing lulaby and Christmas carol

Wishing the girl to leave the shore

 

Ego whisper him all tricks and cheats

Religiously he follows the choir

Choosing double life, oh so sweet

Proud to be crowned a ball of fire

 

Why oh so pretty and sweet

Story made from survive and bleed

Spreading charm, blowing kisses

Never ending disses

 

Stop and still!

See the mirror, do not think but feel

Don't flight and take the sleeping pill

Admit, accept which is real

 

Taking the real for granted

Does the unfaithful weed well planted?

Look how by you she is enchanted

But for strangers you give her for trade

 

But standing straight she still

Watching all the games you play

Universe keep telling her what is real

Her heart stranded and stray

 

still..

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Writer man Atek
man Atek at Stop and Still (3 years 30 weeks ago)
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wow .. mantef tenan
sipsip!

Writer Wanderer
Wanderer at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)
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Favorit saya baris pertama. Bagian tengah agak datar, tapi klimaks di bait akhirnya dapet...
A lover's persistence, ya. Wishing her the best luck because clinging to a certain feeling over someone is uneasy. Hehe.
Disses di atas maksudnya apa? Typo kah?
Salam.

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

Disses is disrespect

Writer hidden pen
hidden pen at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)
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Admit, accept which is real
Taking the real for granted === ettoo aku koq ngerasa ada yg ganjal dengan accept which. Umm apa gak which accept. Aduh jadi puyeng . Hehe maaf bila tak memuaskan . #kavuurr

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

Kalau admit, accept which is real : akui, terima apa yg nyata
Kalau admit which accept is real : akui yang adalah menerima sesuatu yg nyata (kali)..
Jadi mksd saya mmg yg kalimat pertama
Anyway, lombok ya bang? Daerah mana bang?..sma dimana dulu? Saya juga loh ^^..

Writer hidden pen
hidden pen at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

umm artinya jadi beda ya, yaahh kukira which itu emang selalu di depan gitu jadi which
accept.

oohh kita sama ya ^_^ ane di SMK 1 Mataram, tempat tinggal di kec. Lingsar ^_^
SMA mu di mana?

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

Sma 1 bang..standar hahaha..

Writer hidden pen
hidden pen at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

SMA 1 apa ? Banyak loh SMA satu, kalo gak salah ada 4 :v

Writer amanda.joyce333
amanda.joyce333 at Stop and Still (3 years 38 weeks ago)

Yg sebelah dinas pendidikan sm telkom :)