Eyes of the Sun

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I walk by this beautiful mind
You came from nowhere land
and tried to join my line
You were standing behind me, wondering
As what I had asked, thought, and taken from yours
A waiting …

Eyes of the sun and flowers
All are looking up to the light maker
For the pleasure to be followers
Say thanks for the dispatcher
And give a polite smile to the stranger

Eyes of the Sun and Flowers
All are standing on the same way
Never stop believing and still want to stay
Won’t leave to another day
But the time always says
That even you are not here,
It still gives you all
A lovely and influence ray …

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arien arda's picture
arien arda at wuihh (1 year 17 weeks yang lalu)

Rien suka enddingnya..

so sweet and so nice..

keep writing

dendenk's picture
dendenk at peace... (1 year 17 weeks yang lalu)

I'd like to imagined

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renton at yes (1 year 17 weeks yang lalu)

true, endingnya cakep.

keep them coming

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edowallad at wah boleh (1 year 17 weeks yang lalu)

boleh juga nih buat lirik lagu

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hege at boleh aja (1 year 17 weeks yang lalu)

ntar kalo dah jadi lagunya kasi kabar ya... hege mo denger.

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angel0n3arth at nice poem... (1 year 16 weeks yang lalu)

so sweet , nice ending...

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Loki at salut (1 year 12 weeks yang lalu)

ente bisa nulis kaya begini

knp gak mulai nyoba untuk diterapin dalem novel?

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dian k at :P (38 weeks 5 days yang lalu)

hege..
ternyata puitis juga.. hihihi