Tags: cerita | cinta | boys love | Cinta | English short story | FANFIC | sad ending
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(774 words) posted by acu_saree 2 years 31 weeks ago
(906 words) posted by acu_saree 2 years 45 weeks ago
Tags: cerita | cinta | boys love | English short story | FANFIC | sad ending
Komedinya yg mana seh?? K0q aku garing gini bacanya..
Nice... Here your emotion and passion can be sensed. better than the butterfly one. Work on the Grammar. Keep it up
Baiklah,, ceritanya bagus karena ada Uruha disana,, hhe...
Tau ga? Uruha tu kakak gw,, hahahaha...
fall in love not always makes u happy
your knowledge.....
u know what???/
i can't understand yuor story
may i ask you something?
where was you study english?
may be,i can be inteligent girl like you
i can't understand allof 'em. coz i'm still learning english...
salut 4 u...
bagus...
tapi berhubung bahasa inggris saya jelek, jadi susah ngerti, hehe...
riiiiiight.. despite some MAJOR grammatical errors here and there all over the script, i still kinda like the angst-y plot of this story.. it's dark, narrative, and quite detailed as well as descriptive.. err, may i suggest you to have your english-written stories edited first before they are posted here next time? anyways.. great work! keep writing!! =D
~TBC deh
bedewe, namanamanya jangan terlalu dipaksakan, rasanya kurang pas sama latar.