[quote=chinkz]"tremendous is not suppose to be used in any poem. unless you know what suitable word to come after" that's what my english teacher told me. some grammar mistake, watch out! but overall it's commendable :)[/quote] noted! thank's..

"tremendous is not suppose to be used in any poem. unless you know what suitable word to come after" that's what my english teacher told me. some grammar mistake, watch out! but overall it's commendable :)

"tremendous is not suppose to be used in any poem. unless you know what suitable word to come after" that's what my english teacher told me. some grammar mistake, watch out! but overall it's commendable :)

a wish.. i like english poem coz i cannot write it :)

no smoking... still, kata-kata dalam bahasa Indonesia lebih kaya arti dan metafora. Seperti kata Alim Markus : cintailah ploduk-ploduk Indonesia...

itulah kelebihan (yg sbnrnya bukan kelebihan) dr puisi berbahasa inggris...terasa indah tampilannya,,coba ditranslate ke bhs indo iseng2, apakah kokoh ataukan rapuh.

nice one...

Good... so romantic...

gak ngerti, hihihihihihihi

yup aku kira ttg filosofi wanita juga but keren.. cuma ya bner kata mas raga jgn dipisah-pisah, susah bacanya.. :)