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"cahaya"
(28 words) posted by mieL 1 year 38 weeks ago
66
Tags: Puisi
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impossible
(36 words) posted by mieL 1 year 38 weeks ago
70
Tags: Puisi
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impossible
(36 words) posted by mieL 1 year 38 weeks ago
70
Tags: Puisi
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jubah hitam
(75 words) posted by mieL 1 year 40 weeks ago
58.3333
Tags: Puisi | cinta | hehehehe
75
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"MR. X"
(38 words) posted by mieL 1 year 40 weeks ago
62.5
Tags: Puisi | kehidupan
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Writer amai_MiDoRi
amai_MiDoRi at (1 year 28 weeks ago)

biar lbh dpt emosinya baekny kerangka puisinya dipola secara teratur,baik rima atau penekanan2 kata yang dianggap penting.trm ksh bwt commentnya di cerita pohon.salam kenal

Writer dora_emon28
dora_emon28 at (1 year 35 weeks ago)

gokil abis btw klu aQ ptgs plnx ku matiin lampunya smpai u bosan.he...he..he..

Writer analogycs
analogycs at (1 year 35 weeks ago)

bermain dengan metafora karya teteh akan semakin indah, keep create, bolehlah berkunjung di ruang analogiku, sami2 urang bandung kan,
Salam,

Writer analogycs
analogycs at (1 year 35 weeks ago)

udah manis ko pemilihan katanya, bolehlah ditambahin diksinya, biar tambah greget ketika dibaca pembaca lainnya, keep berkarya, salam kenal, bolehlah berkunjung di ruang analogiku,
Salam,

Writer analogycs
analogycs at (1 year 35 weeks ago)

hehehe...salam kenal, jangan marah gitu dong teh....bolehlah berkunjung di ruang analogiku
Salam,

Writer bait-bait kelabu
bait-bait kelabu at (1 year 35 weeks ago)

keren doraemon...
kok da aa dorayakinya..
bli di carefour ajah...hehehe

Writer tsukki-chan
tsukki-chan at (1 year 37 weeks ago)

GOKIL

Writer Irin Sintriana
Irin Sintriana at (1 year 37 weeks ago)

Doraeeeemoonnn....

Jadi inget lagunya :)

Writer layaty
layaty at (1 year 38 weeks ago)

wele............ hahaha

Writer Irin Sintriana
Irin Sintriana at (1 year 38 weeks ago)

Haha...

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