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Writer Aninsane
Aninsane at (3 years 17 weeks ago)

ah sialll... gw baca ini jadi baper, wkwkwk
bagus sekali perumpamaannya! cocok, sumpah. belum lagi cara nembak dan jawaban yang tidak biasa, yang juga berkaitan erat dengan perumpamannya. I like it

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Writer iggy11
iggy11 at (4 years 2 days ago)

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Writer Riesling
Riesling at (4 years 2 weeks ago)

nggak bersambung tapi ada cerita lain yg berhubungan. nulisnya setengah tidur orz. iya,.ada placeholder yg ketinggalan.
makasih sudah mampir~

Writer Rheine
Rheine at (4 years 2 weeks ago)

Oh, ini cerita bersambung? Mungkin agak salah saya baca dari tengah.

Interaksi dan chemistry antarkarakternya menarik. Tetapi saya agak tidak terbiasa bahasa penulisannya sehingga kurang nyaman.

Dan...
itu apakah cuma placeholder nama?

Writer azura_caelestis
azura_caelestis at (4 years 19 weeks ago)

Duh, saya terobsesi dengan gaya penulisannya. Keren banget. Kayak tipe chicklit yang di-Indonesia-kan. Ada hype-nya, ada sedihnya, ada juga konyolnya. Di narasinya yang menggunakan gaya bahasa yang sederhana, Riesling ini berhasil mengguncang emosi saya.

Sudah lama rasanya saya gak terpaku membaca sesuatu di internet. Dan saya seneng bisa menemukan fiksi macam ini.

Kalau dari sisi ide, lagi-lagi terasa klise, tapi bukan klise-nya yang pengin saya rendahkan, tapi gimana cara mengemasnya yang menarik. Dari sebuah gaya bahasa yang santai tapi formal, narasinya terasa mengalir banget. Terus saya juga suka dengan dialognya, walau awalnya saya berpikir sepertinya ini akan menjurus kepada tulisan yang semi terjemahan, tapi nyatanya, dialog yang dipakainya sangat gaul. Hibrida yang oke deh.

Tetap menulis :)

Writer azura_caelestis
azura_caelestis at (4 years 19 weeks ago)

Ceritanya menarik banget. Dan saya suka sekali dengan metafora pintunya. Luar biasa brilian. Haha! Kalau dilihat dari sudut pandang yang lain, saya bisa bilang kalau ide cerita ini klise, tentang cinta yang sulit diungkapkan, tapi kalau dibaca dengan gaya yang seperti ini, pembaca jadi ikut jungkir balik dan senyum-senyum.

Tapi, saya menemukan kalimat yang agak ganjil di sini: Dia bahkan tidak tahu ipintu ada sampai aku secara tidak langsung memberitahunya beberapa hari yang lalu.

Mungkin kehilangan kata "kalau"? Kalau enggak ada "kalau" agak aneh sih pas dibacanya.

Overall, cerita ini bikin saya senyam-senyum dari awal sampai akhir cerita. Loved.

Writer 2rfp
2rfp at (4 years 19 weeks ago)

bagus, keren, apalah ya kata yang tepat, asik kali ya. hahaha

Writer nusantara
nusantara at (4 years 19 weeks ago)

blm bisa komen apalagi kritikan

Writer vava44
vava44 at (4 years 19 weeks ago)

cerita ini cocok banget untuk mengahayal tingkat tinggi hehehe

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