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How It Feels Like To Kill Yourself By Jumping Off The Bridge

The air rushed through her
long waving hair
at the last plunge of the
roller coaster of life

The camera flashed
and she arrived where she
had been

Everything went Past
then came a big splash

After the ripple had subsided
the river of life flows on
unaware of the lost of its
one fish

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Muslimovich's picture
Muslimovich at (15 weeks 4 days yang lalu)
50

its too compilcated but thisis a good things ..try to be more catchy! salute!!

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blossoms at (18 weeks 4 days yang lalu)
70

Smile

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khatrine at (18 weeks 4 days yang lalu)
70

waduh...
sayang sekali aku gak gtu tau apa makna yang terkandung dalam puisi ini. Sad