You're my true love

I don't know how long... but it's been sometimes...
How much do I really know about you?
Following the map with my fingertips isn't getting us anywhere
I see how it distresses you in your face, so much you try to conceal it
It's strange, how even as I run in circles as if resisting my advance to a busy future
My heart still draws you...

I want to stay here watching your smile forever
I want to live each changing moment in your eyes,
in that one scene us close forever colored in gentle hues
to bring us close together, I want o stop time forever

I want to stay here watching your smile forever
I want to live each changing moment in your eyes
If one day I could bring you to a serene season
to the flowers blomming in the sky like snowflakes
to the flowers...

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Writer zeke2ripsts
zeke2ripsts at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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hmmm..bagus..tp gpp kok walaupun dari buku.. :)

Writer phoenixtales
phoenixtales at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
50

ups.. br lihat klo di copy paste..
sorry, jd commentq hrs diubah.
so.. untuk perkenalan, gpplah q kasi poin. Tp utk selanjutnya, tunjukkin karya lo!

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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This is my first comment to you. Please bear it.

You took it from a book? What book? Could you please write the credit here so that you are not infringing someone's copyright? Plagirism is sensitive here, and it is not tolerated even a bit.

Tolong baca Term of Condition di website ini, yang muncul setiap kali kita log in. Ini saya copy paste pasal yang relevan:


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Writer rianto
rianto at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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bisa ditranslate ke bhs persatuan kita nggak?? ini hanya saran aja kok. tetap semangat, pertahankanlah cinta yg engkau rasa...!!! salam kenal

Writer baru_aja_belajar
baru_aja_belajar at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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very nice. maap kk, klo kk ngarepin komentar bagus

Writer 145
145 at You're my true love (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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Uhhh kapan-kapan kalau komentar cerita orang tolong yang bermanfaat. jangan cuman sekedar: "Wuih bagus..." ato "pokoknya semangat..." dan yang sejenisnya. Meski ngasih poin bagus sebenarnya itu justru mencelakakan orang yang anda beri poin, jika komennya tak membangun