unsettled

cowardly the man said,,
pull up the string that was trusted,,
once again he passed down his mistakes,,
so the net catch more fish,,
and the fisherman happy...

toward the man implied,,
seldom he made it nice,,
clever like a cat-fox,,
to have more dishes,,
so the man laugh..

here by here we help,,
but these on there we're stab,,
stood our knee fell on the grass,,
with pale thrown to bushes,,
and the carpenter growl..

the man asked for help,,
to God and comrade,,
the time being polite,,
he stab one after another,,
so the God confuse..

the God replied,,
son of man of mortal being,,
what do you really asked,,
forgiveness for your sins,,
or the strength to stab people..

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Writer brylian
brylian at unsettled (8 years 40 weeks ago)

good

makkie at unsettled (8 years 40 weeks ago)

thx..lam kenal...

Writer ferdyanmahendra
ferdyanmahendra at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)
90

mantepphh!

makkie at unsettled (8 years 40 weeks ago)

thx,,,

Writer aiyura
aiyura at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)
90

so man, what you really really want?
:DD

makkie at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)

heuheuheu...i'm not a man...

Writer Midori_Fukuro
Midori_Fukuro at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)
80

mau buka camus,hehehe
tapi, saya juga memberi poin (although I don't uders(t)and...)

makkie at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)

saya aja yang bikin juga ga ngerti...heuheuheu..makasih dah mampir..

Writer shafira
shafira at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)
80

perumpamaan yang unik..
bahasa inggris pula..
tapi ketika membacanya entah kenapa di kepalaku seperti ada sebuah musik rap..

mampir ya ke cerpen ulang tahunku..
Hadiah Pertama Buat Emak dari Aisyah

makkie at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)

ah..makasi dah mampir...
yup,,nanti bertandang ke sana...

makkie at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)

ah..makasi dah mampir...
yup,,nanti bertandang ke sana...

makkie at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)

ah..makasih...nyoba2 aja..makasi buat pointnya.. :)

Writer lavender
lavender at unsettled (8 years 41 weeks ago)
100

saya selalu suka karya in englishhhhh.. apalagi dibikin poem begini dahh..
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