Four Days to the Seventh

thousand days before this frame,
words were spilled, heart was filled.
It was my only hope,
Spilled words were without shame,
Like an untie rope.

Your embrace left alone,
A piece of bliss,
which was at least,
Trying to make my life shone.

It is now four days to the seventh
May God grants His bless longer,
and ultimately ever after,
Either on earth, or in heaven.

 

#31 of The Eighth, 2012

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Writer Alfreda
Alfreda at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)
70

First thing come into my mind is: well, it was Tuesday.
*maap kalo salah, salam kenal suhu.

Writer tipattahu
tipattahu at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)

yup! it was a wonderful tuesday.. lol

salam kenal.. :D

Writer Alfreda
Alfreda at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)

haha jadi bener ni maksudnya four days to the seventh itu maksudnya Tuesday?
:D

Writer tipattahu
tipattahu at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)

bener, hari itu adalah tuesday, tapi ada hal lain juga tentunya.. :D

Writer NiNa
NiNa at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)
80

aduh, walaupun sudah diartikan sepertinya saya gagal, sedikit sekali. pun judulnya

Writer tipattahu
tipattahu at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)

kuharap ak tidak membuatmu kebingungan karenanya.. :D

thank you for coming..

Writer dewi linggasari
dewi linggasari at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)
90

Really nice....

Writer tipattahu
tipattahu at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 17 weeks ago)

thanks! :)

Writer rouv_azzacky
rouv_azzacky at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 19 weeks ago)
70

shameless conversation would be easy if we have no such expectation, or we could bring carelessness to the table, :p

Writer Kaze seimaru
Kaze seimaru at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 19 weeks ago)
70

nice

Writer Favemale
Favemale at Four Days to the Seventh (6 years 19 weeks ago)
80

Amiinn..
Nice poem :)