The Three Flowers

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Writer adinda_cute_luvnda
adinda_cute_luvnda at The Three Flowers (10 years 51 weeks ago)
50

walaupun pemakaian kata2 nya... biasa ja...
tapi setelah aku baca berulang2 kali...
puisinya punya.. arti kehidupan yang mendalam..aku bner2 kagum... :D

Writer bLuE_dRagOn
bLuE_dRagOn at The Three Flowers (11 years 6 weeks ago)
100

:) hbad bgd ya kamu..

tlis puisi dlm bhs ing.

slut..!!! q ska puisix.. kykx shakespare kalah nich..!!

Writer rainy girl
rainy girl at The Three Flowers (11 years 6 weeks ago)
90

i like this part :
It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust

overall, what a nice poem O:)

keep writin' =D>

Writer SnowDrop
SnowDrop at The Three Flowers (11 years 10 weeks ago)
100

keren,,apalagi ditulis [pake bahas inggris,,dobel keren..lu bisa bikin airmata gw merebak(tsaahhh),,haha,sumpah keren..gw punya YM ko,,add aja yahoo id gw..kapan2 kita ngobrol ya ! very nice to know you O:)

Writer Luckyuline79
Luckyuline79 at The Three Flowers (11 years 23 weeks ago)
70

wah...keren banget puisinya walau susunan katanya biasa2 saja, tapi secara keseluruhan puisinya mempunyai makna yang dlam.

Writer dirgita
dirgita at The Three Flowers (11 years 29 weeks ago)
80

As I gazed upon the three flowers
A thought came into my mind
How fleeting this life could be

Bait pamungkas! Di situ aku sadar arah puisi ini. Eh, kapan posting cerita lagi?

Writer bunghatta_crb
bunghatta_crb at The Three Flowers (11 years 30 weeks ago)
50

Suer jago juga bikin puisinya, salut buat kamu

Writer khariezma
khariezma at The Three Flowers (11 years 32 weeks ago)
70

adrian, i just want to say, may i studying english with u?i want to make a written in english to as you

Writer Roshie
Roshie at The Three Flowers (11 years 37 weeks ago)
50

walau bacanya agak mengerutkan kening tapi bagus juga.sayang bahasanya inggris ya.tp sedikitnya aku ngerti kok.dan
bagus bgt

Writer warna kecil
warna kecil at The Three Flowers (11 years 39 weeks ago)
60

ikutan aja ah biar ga ngerti tp ikut
he he he he....
nice descption

Writer arie_ajalah
arie_ajalah at The Three Flowers (11 years 41 weeks ago)
60

ajib ajib, walau poemnya english but oke deh

Writer anime_131
anime_131 at The Three Flowers (11 years 41 weeks ago)
100

cool...

umur berapa sih??hebat banget

Shakespare kalah romantis nih..
nanti jangan lupa yah kasi komen ke cerpen selanjutnya : legend of deathlock(part two) the forgotten memories...nanti perbaiki lagi ya,maklum kalo banyak kesalahan,tulisan anak kelas 1 SMP

OK??

keep writing

Writer starof hope
starof hope at The Three Flowers (11 years 42 weeks ago)
100

sebelum nyerocos enggak karuan, salam kenal ya...

kerasa banget!

Writer sefry_chairil
sefry_chairil at The Three Flowers (12 years 11 weeks ago)
100

Yan.. I can feel it!
Ini puisi yang kamu ceritain ke aku kan?
Hmm.. ya, wonderful!

Writer chau
chau at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust

keren!
serasa baca sastra arab tinggi
cuma versi englishnya

Writer yugi_yakuza
yugi_yakuza at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
100

ko pda pke bhsa planet c..
ne bhsa mna yaks...???
hiks...
:(

keren bro..!!!
lanjutkan perjuanganmu..
(halah)
^_^

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)

Teman2, makasih dah mau baca dan kasih komentar. Aduh, dah nembus angka 100, senangnya ^^

The Three Fowers, Among the Clouds... Guys, please read my stories & poems at K.com ^_^

Writer bluer
bluer at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

nice poem, picturing a life;

"It all would fall to the ground
Back to dust"

Writer bunda_ery
bunda_ery at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

Read appeal..^-^

Writer edowallad
edowallad at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
100

justice

Writer bl09on
bl09on at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

maaf neh baru kesampean dah ngerti skrg maksdnya...
semua makhluk hdp sama akhirnya...cuman ke sampah gknya dont know!!!1

Writer kucing_betina
kucing_betina at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

sweet, meski aga pusing juga..;)

Writer alexjhon
alexjhon at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
70

hm.. reading yer.. poem.. gets me the breeze ^^ okay fell the changing of seaason.. but its not about season.. it about yer life huh? yeah.. as long u realize.. time will always move forward.. then u will be fully prepared ^^

COME And visit ma stories.. hey i like to write English poem 2 ^^ keep it up

Writer niska
niska at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

a poem in english... (kamusku mana ya.. :D )

Writer azura7
azura7 at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

And you See everyhing

Writer mtop666
mtop666 at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

Ane jadi inget lagunya The Beatles yang judulnya In My Life... Cool

Writer my bro
my bro at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

lepasin emosinya... jgn ditahan2 gt.. keren kok

Writer noir
noir at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
70

Lembut...

Writer hiutara_baz
hiutara_baz at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

cool poem....
analogi tiga bunga yang keren....
top dah!!

Writer diraparau
diraparau at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
90

nice, like sunset... :)

Writer suri-jamur
suri-jamur at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
60

^_______^
Nice life right?

Writer nosferatu
nosferatu at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
50

nice poem...

i like flowers..
hehehehe.. :)

Writer hasnankh
hasnankh at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
80

it's indeed very good

Writer cat
cat at The Three Flowers (12 years 12 weeks ago)
60

wa ndak begitu bagus di bahasa inggris
yg jelas sepertinya kata-katanya keren, and this is a nice poems.