Hati

duh.
hatimu berserakan di lantai kamarku
sebentar. kuambil pengki dan sapu

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Writer 51-374
51-374 at Hati (11 years 2 weeks ago)
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jokpin... =D>

Writer ananda
ananda at Hati (11 years 27 weeks ago)
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ini ya ...yang dibilang Jokpin ?

*tepuk tangan buat mbak gheee

Writer wehahaha
wehahaha at Hati (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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baru komen karena baru tau dari resensinya. Bner kata dia. Lucu abis.

Writer AyyaThea
AyyaThea at Hati (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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dalem banget...

Writer miss worm
miss worm at Hati (12 years 7 weeks ago)
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hehehehe
ghe banget *bayangin ghe nyapu di kamar kos*

Writer _aR_
_aR_ at Hati (12 years 8 weeks ago)
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itu ajah !

Writer Ratih
Ratih at Hati (12 years 8 weeks ago)
80

Tu cowok bener2 gak ada artinya lagi buat elo rupanya yaaaa?

Writer loushevaon7
loushevaon7 at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
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itu aja.

Writer prince-adi
prince-adi at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
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kok bisa sih buat puisi kaya gini??
aku iri..
ajari ajari ajari

Writer noir
noir at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
80

Pendek benerrrr...
Tp lucu :P

Writer arien arda
arien arda at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
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kaget..
menarik...
simple..
tapi dalem banget...

good job...

keep writing
sampe senyum2 bacanya

Writer princess2dee
princess2dee at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
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buat gw langsung senyum begitu baca
sebentar, ku ambil pengki dan sapu,
entah mau di rangkai kembali ato malah di buang di tempat sampah...
briliant idea

Writer gheta
gheta at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
80

simple tapi bisa mewakili semuanya.
suasana, rasa, kekacauan. semuanya dapet disini.

bagus ghe... aku suka puisi pendek kayak begini.

*blajar ngoment serius! hehehehehe.. dah serius blom ya ini.

Writer cat
cat at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
50

Astaga!! habis disapu sekalian di pel ya ...

Writer ivaput
ivaput at Hati (12 years 9 weeks ago)
70

apakah akan kau buang ke toNg sampaH?
hehehe (n_n)