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Writer rainy girl
rainy girl at Fly Again (11 years 6 weeks ago)
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:''(
uwaa...manisnya :X

Writer chinkz
chinkz at Fly Again (11 years 10 weeks ago)
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niceeeeeeeeeeee

Writer benz
benz at Fly Again (11 years 17 weeks ago)
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salam kenal ya bang adrian.. hehe..

kalau ada waktu mampir2 ke cerpen perdanaku : Logika Tak Suka Cinta yaahh..

makasih banyak sebelumnya..

^_^

Writer s1en13
s1en13 at Fly Again (11 years 17 weeks ago)
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waduh..sakit aja dibikinin puisi, mau donks..heheehe..

Writer serpentwitch
serpentwitch at Fly Again (11 years 25 weeks ago)
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masi kurang ngena nada2 puisinya.

flownya kurang, bacanya terputus2. Kl bikin puisi tuh tes dulu baca sendiri, dan nilai sendiri dah pas blom flownya. puisi harus bisa ngalir dan enak dibaca :)

Writer Zhang he
Zhang he at Fly Again (11 years 27 weeks ago)
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Agak terlalu sederhana ya... ^^
but okay lah

Writer i-rash
i-rash at Fly Again (11 years 29 weeks ago)
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good
salam kenal

Writer Bamby Cahyadi
Bamby Cahyadi at Fly Again (11 years 30 weeks ago)
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Ternyata dikau yang suke membuat puisi dan cerita dengan bahasa inggris.
Ada seorang lagi yang bercerita dengan bhs inggris yaitu kodename key.

Mana nich cerita terbarunya?

Writer ranggamahesa
ranggamahesa at Fly Again (11 years 31 weeks ago)
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Aku udh sembuh kok.. (hihihi)

Writer snap
snap at Fly Again (11 years 31 weeks ago)
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trus skarang dah sembuh ?

Writer kenary
kenary at Fly Again (11 years 32 weeks ago)
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Writer kiki
kiki at Fly Again (11 years 32 weeks ago)
80

NicE Poems...

Writer uchinaja
uchinaja at Fly Again (11 years 32 weeks ago)
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Mudah dicerna..

Writer avian dewanto
avian dewanto at Fly Again (11 years 32 weeks ago)
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again, i must say, this poem must rewritten. yes, its wrote in English. but, this poem like that you translate it in English but your mind in bahasa Indonesia. English poem is english. Not only taste of "bahasa" Indonesia in English.

but, to appreciate what you have done, i give you a "flower"

Writer someonefromthesky
someonefromthesky at Fly Again (11 years 33 weeks ago)
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It's simply sweet and romantic. I believe there is a lot of amount of emotions attached in this poem. While it's not the most attractive or unique words, the fact that it's based on real experience made this poem has it's own soul.

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read & comment my english poem too:
"Spell of The Spelcaster"
http://www.kemudian.com/node/70150

Writer senyumdewa
senyumdewa at Fly Again (11 years 34 weeks ago)
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bagus ...

Writer tyas
tyas at Fly Again (11 years 34 weeks ago)
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simple & nice
:)

Writer benwolf_ben10_
benwolf_ben10_ at Fly Again (11 years 34 weeks ago)
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Writer prince-adi
prince-adi at Fly Again (11 years 35 weeks ago)
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kalo diterjemahkan ke bahasa Indonesia dan dituliskan serupa dengan artinya...jadi jelek sih..

berhubung pake bahasa inggris, jadi keliatan bagus

kenapa ya??

Writer ukhti_fighter
ukhti_fighter at Fly Again (11 years 36 weeks ago)
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I always touch by simplicity...

Anyway, can I be a friend who able to discuss lots of stuff with you?
I really need to improve my english skill...

Writer dirgita
dirgita at Fly Again (11 years 38 weeks ago)
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Mas adrian.achyar sepertinya boleh dibilang jago dalam bahasa Inggris, mengapa tidak bergabung bersama proyek penerjemahan OpenOffice.org ke bahasa Indonesia? Tambah-tambah pahala, loh.

Untuk puisi ini, sederhana. Meski sederhana, sepertinya akan sangat menggugah bagi orang yang dituju.

BTW, ada yang komen di salah satu bab novelku. Katanya, di bagian akhir ada yang error. Tapi, tidak tahu error dari segi apa. Sudah diperiksa, koding html-nya bener. Tolong diperiksa, ya? Satu minggu juga boleh, soalnya ceritanya panjaaang banget! Trims.

Writer imr_aja
imr_aja at Fly Again (11 years 38 weeks ago)
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with your words

Writer jugermix
jugermix at Fly Again (11 years 40 weeks ago)
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Sedih ya kalo orang yang kita sayangin lagi sakit....

Writer Endy Tatsuke
Endy Tatsuke at Fly Again (11 years 40 weeks ago)
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Taht;s amazing man!

Writer codenameKEY
codenameKEY at Fly Again (11 years 40 weeks ago)
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Kapan yah english-ku bisa sbgus kamu...?
Jadi friend ok?

Writer conan
conan at Fly Again (11 years 40 weeks ago)
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Simple... Tapi ok bgtzzz..
^-^

Writer qmax
qmax at Fly Again (11 years 40 weeks ago)
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Keren euy..simpel n smart

Writer ssssss
ssssss at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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sumpah kagak ngerti......

Writer abc
abc at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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bagus.... tapi dengan penggunaan metafora akan jauh lebih baik

Writer rielleverno
rielleverno at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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ditengah2... hehehe....

Writer Nanasa
Nanasa at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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Nice to be your honey :)

Writer starof hope
starof hope at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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duuuhhh

kereeeen...

Writer devilcoco
devilcoco at Fly Again (11 years 41 weeks ago)
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siiiiiiippppppppp
goooooddddddd
ooooookkkkkkk

Writer bunda_ery
bunda_ery at Fly Again (11 years 42 weeks ago)
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siiiiiiiipppppppppp

Writer niFa_nFa
niFa_nFa at Fly Again (11 years 43 weeks ago)
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lam kenal...
uhm...
romantis juga, he...

Writer kukirasiapa
kukirasiapa at Fly Again (11 years 43 weeks ago)
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sudah sembuh belum hun-nya? (gimana ga sembuh kalo selalu diperhatiin gini..) love can cure, right?

Writer Gieduth
Gieduth at Fly Again (11 years 44 weeks ago)
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Ampun Dj!
kayanya Hige kalah romantis d.
klo dr grammar Hige ga berani komen tp klo soal feeling, ngena banget!

mas komenin puisi saya dunk, saya juga baru bikin puisi basa inggris.
mohon caci maki nya more at: I Miss You

Writer cat
cat at Fly Again (11 years 45 weeks ago)
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romantis bgt..
mg2 langgeng trus ya.

Writer takiyo_an-nabhani
takiyo_an-nabhani at Fly Again (11 years 45 weeks ago)
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Assalamu'alaikum
Salam kenal...
So nice, Let her be in yours...
Wassalamu'alaikum

Writer Ghoz_Roro
Ghoz_Roro at Fly Again (11 years 45 weeks ago)
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wow bagus
ada yang kangen deh kayaknya?

Writer panah hujan
panah hujan at Fly Again (11 years 46 weeks ago)
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kemana ya dirinya???

:)

ada yang beromantisria untuknya nih.,

Writer yosi_hsn
yosi_hsn at Fly Again (11 years 47 weeks ago)
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Terbang berdua, romantisnya...!

Writer adrian.achyar
adrian.achyar at Fly Again (11 years 47 weeks ago)

Teman2, makasih ya dah mau baca dan komentar :)

Untuk bukan siapa siapa :
IMHO itu apa ya? He3, vulgar ya? He3, jelek ya? Maklumlah masih belajar :)

Guys, please read my poems & stories at K.com ^_^

Writer bukan siapa siapa
bukan siapa siapa at Fly Again (11 years 47 weeks ago)
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IMHO buatku kata-kata yang tersurat sudah terlalu membuka makna yang tersirat, istilahnya telalu vulgar. tapi kalo emang itu yg penulis ini mau maka silahkan saja:)

Writer edowallad
edowallad at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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berdua aja
ajak2 dong

Writer yugi_yakuza
yugi_yakuza at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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betul tu apa kata Noir,,
Hummm,,,,
gw jadi curiga niy,, :-?
:D

Mantab bro,,,!!!
and semoga sefry na cepet sembuh ye bro...
^_^

Writer my bro
my bro at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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romantic couple of the month ^_^

*toyor dua2nya ah
*kabuuuuur

Writer bl09on
bl09on at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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creative tukang jiplak ntar ketauan kali...
hihi keren bang puisi cintanya...

Writer creativeway13th
creativeway13th at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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mau gue pake ah kata-katanya kalo udah punya 'hun'..^^

Writer noir
noir at Fly Again (11 years 51 weeks ago)
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Habis yang satu sakit, sekarang giliran pasangannya. Jangan2 saling menularkan ya -sotoy-