mohon kritiknya

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(2982 words) posted by smith61 5 years 21 weeks ago
50
Tags: Cerita | Cerita Bersambung | fantasi | Agama | mohon kritiknya | NB | Nurakarun
76
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(1999 words) posted by smith61 9 years 14 weeks ago
76
Tags: Cerita | lain - lain | battle | fantasi | makhluk batu | mohon kritiknya
111
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(1254 words) posted by smith61 9 years 16 weeks ago
74
Tags: Cerita | lain - lain | fantasy | mohon kritiknya | nanti saya kitikin lho | part of background Codex