120190 : Comments

Writer agus1234
agus1234 at (10 years 8 weeks ago)

good

Writer langitboemi
langitboemi at (11 years 7 weeks ago)

Semangat!!!

Writer echanalukman
echanalukman at (11 years 11 weeks ago)

coba diskinya bisa lebih dieksplor lagi...
kalau ini masih terkesan datar..biasa aja...gak ada gregetnya...
bumbunya kurang banged...
but..nice trying lah...
mari sama-sama belajar lagi...

kunjungi karya terbaruku juga ya...
thanks...

Writer ezra
ezra at (11 years 11 weeks ago)

kanfas >> kanvas
masih kurang berasa alunannya
terasa agak sedikit memaksakan kata

salam

Writer hanum
hanum at (11 years 11 weeks ago)

hmmm,...sepihkan beling titahkan duka...getarkan hati

Writer kemuning
kemuning at (11 years 12 weeks ago)

deuuuu... klo ilang nyari lagi dong om...
huahahaha...
tapi lembut bgt puisimu...

:D

Writer ezra
ezra at (11 years 12 weeks ago)

ada kata 'masih', berarti belum sepenuhnya hilang
ada harap dibalik itu

salam

Writer Irin Sintriana
Irin Sintriana at (11 years 12 weeks ago)

Keep writing, cia you...

Writer echanalukman
echanalukman at (11 years 12 weeks ago)

terus terang, aku gak dapet feelnya...:)
keep trying ajah...

Writer tari
tari at (11 years 14 weeks ago)

malam,

saatnya bermimpi